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Lost in the Darkness - Ch 1

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Silver woke up and stretched, it was one fine day. The sun warmed her fur, she purred. She got up,brushed her teeth,groomed her fur, put on her scarf, and went online to deviantART. She looked at her inbox..80 feedback messages, 15 watches, and 50 artworks. Silver always saved the best for last, her feedback messages. So at first she checked her friends' news and art. After a while, she went to the feedback messages sections. She sighed,it showed alot of activity of favs of her art..but only a few comments or replies.
Silver jumped out of her computer chair and padded outside, she gazed at the bright blue sky. She went to go find one of her dA friends, of course, they were all here, since it was a dA digital world for characters afterall. She picked up her mouse toy and called to her friends; Sunfur25,Jessiepie, and others. Still no reply. They must be offline , thought Silver. She dropped her mouse toy, it squeaked as it fell. The grass under Silver's paws suddenly felt..strange. It felt like slimy..slimy goo instead of grass...Silver looked around and saw that her home, and others..suddenly turned dark! A darkness was covering the digital world! "What's going on??", yelled Silver in alarm. No one heard her..the ground under her turned transparent, and just before she knew anything, she started to fall..way into the darkness....

To be continued
Well, um..the title fails, hmm..anyone else have a better title?
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ZeroAzel's avatar
im not good with titles but for now that sounds pretty good. i like the basic plot from what i can discern